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bhai mere munna abhi shant shant nahi raha
wo kavita ko kar chuka hain
ab usase pyar bhi karane laga hain
use sujata ke changul se chhudane ki planing
bhi kar raha hain

padhata nahi hain thik se

aur naraj hone ka to bahana tha...
he ...he...he...he...
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nice story......

all characters are well maintain in the story....excellent workkk

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rashmi rinku ke kamare me, usake pas sofe par baithi thi, monty aur romi us waquat, waha maujud nahi the, rinku ne unhe dusare kamare me bhej diya tha, taki rashmi unhe dekh kar tention me aajye.

"kya tum kuchh piyogi...?"......rinku ne rashmi ko narmal feel karane ke erade se puchha.

"nahi...meri echha nahi hain'.......rashmi wakai uneasy mahasus kar rahi thi.

"are ghabarao mat.....sirf colddrinks le lo...main usame kuchh milaungi nahi".....rinku ne jabaran pepsi rashmi ko thama di.

"tum kuchh kahana chahati thi.....koi mere fayade ki bat"....rashmi se raha nahi gaya

"han...essi liye to tumhe yaha bulaya hain.....dekho rashmi main janati hu, tum neelu ko lekar bahut chintit ho.....daari hue bhi ho....lekin kya tumhe pata hain....neelu ab khatare se bahar hain.....sirf koma me hain.....aur koma se bhi bahar aana mahaj waquat ki bat hain".......rinku rashmi ke chehare ko dhyan se dekh rahi thi.

rashmi ke chehare se tanav kafi kam hua tha, wo pepsi ke halke halke ghut le rahi thi

"ab meri bat dhyan se suno.....us rat jo hua...us bare me bahar logo se koi bhi bat nahi karega.....jitane bhi ladake, ladkiya us rat hamare sath the, unme se kisi ko bhi nahi pata ki neelu ke sath kya hua hain.....wo sirf etana janate hain ki usake sath koi hadasa hua hain...aur wo koma me hain.......sirf tu hi aisi ladaki hai.....jo janati hain, neelu ke koma me jane ki asali wajah kya hain...aur ye hi hamare liye sabase badi chinta ki bat hain......ab tum hi batao hum tere sath kaisa saluk kare...?".............rinku ki bat sunkar rashmi ekdam sakate me aagayi,.....wo samaz nahi pa rahi thi, ki rinku use samaza rahi hain ki dhamaka rahi hain.

"mm...m..main kuchh samazi nahi...tum kahana kya chahati ho..?"

"muze dar hain ki tum, apana muh band nahi rakhogi.....jajbato me bahakar..kahi na kahi, muh fadogi....aur hamare liye musibt khadi kardogi........agar main chahu to tumhara muh hamesha ke liye band karwa sakati hu.......

"nahi nahi pl ye tum kya kah rahi ho,.....agar main muh kholungi to meri, aur mere sath sath mere pariwar ki bhi badnami hogi......mera vishwas karo main kisi se kuchha nahi kahungi"......rashmi kampati huyi awaz me boli.....sirf awaz hi nahi, wo puri tarah kamp rahi thi.

"nahi darling.....main nahi manati ki tum sirf badnami ke dar se khamosh baithogi.....neelu ki halat, aur usaki dasti, tumhe muh kholnane par majboor kar sakati hain.......main pakka yakin karana chahati hu.......tumhe kuchh dakhana chahati hu."......rinku sofe se uthakar diwar me lagi ek safe kholane lagi.......rashmi nervouse ho kar use dekhati rahi

rinku ne safe me se ek CD nikalkar, wahi pade ek player me dal di aur tv on kar diya, kuchh hi palo me jo tv par dikhayi dene laga, wo dkhane ke bad to rashmi ke hosh ud gaye, usaki ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi,...ganimat thi ki wo behosh nahi hue......CD me wo aur monty dikhayi de rahe the, us rat ka pura shutting tha us cd me, rashmi ka chehara aisa lag raha tha mano usake jism se pura khun nichod liya ho.....ekdam safed,....rakh sa safed........"ye ...ye band karo...pl...main dekh nahi sakati...pl band karo esse".....rashmi jor se chilla padi.

"kyu rashmi darling.....sirf shuruat dekhakar hi hosh ud gaye.....abhi age aur hain.....romi, lucky...aur bhi ldake....puri randi ban gayi thi tum.....jam ke le rahi thi ....wo bhi bade pyar se.....koi jabardasti nahi...........agar ye CD main pure shahar me bat du to kya hoga......?

""main tumhare pav padati hu, bhikh mangati hu......pl ye cd muze de do....mera yakin karo main kisi se kuchha nahi kahungi......main apane maabap ki kasam khati hu.....pl rinku...ye cd muze de do.....pl.".....rashmi ne sachmuch rinku ke pair pakad liye the, wo ro rahi thi, gidgida rahi thi.......lekin rinku par na koi asar hona tha na hua,......usane rashmi ke bal pakad kar use uthaya, apane pass bithaya, aur kaha..

" dekh rashmi, ab rone dhone se kuchh nahi hoga,......jab tak neelu thik hokar ghar nahi aati,...jab tak ye mamala thanda nahi pad jata,.....jab tak muze yakin nahi ho jata, ki tumase muze koi khatara nahi, tab tak ye cd mere pass hi rahegi,......aur tab tak tu meri gulam ban kar rahegi......meri palatu kutiya bankar rahegi,....jo main kahu wo tumhe karana padega....koi nakhare nahi, koi na nukur nahi......bol manjur hain..?"

rashmi ke pass aur dusara kya option tha, han kahane ke siva....usane gardan niche karadi aur han kar di.

rinku ne bade hi santushti purn tarike se hoth chatakaye, aur intercom utha ke monty, romi ko kamare me bulaliya.
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Originally Posted by aaucsan;
nice story......

all characters are well maintain in the story....excellent workkk

Best of Luck...

~Aucsan~
tmanx aaucsan bhai
u have replied in a nice way
i do love characters in this story
thanx for replay
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monty aur romi ke kamare me aate hi rashmi samaz gayi, "palatu kutiya' se rinku ka kya matlab tha, wo aur ghabara gayi, sex ka bukhar usaka kab ka utar chuka tha, apani galati ka use ahasas ho chuka tha, lekin ab der ho chuki thi......us cd ka rinku ke pass hona, jahir karata tha ab use, rinku ke eshare par nachana tha, chahe marji se, chahe majboori se......ab use iss adhapatan se koi nahi rok sakata tha.

kamare me aate hi monty aur romi usake dono taraf baith gaye,

"kya kahati hain hamari rashmi darling......us rat to badi uchhal kud kar rahi thi, aaj mood kyu ukhada hain, janeman.......?"......monty ne usake gale me hath dal kar apane pass khicha

"lagata hain us rat ki chudai se hamari rashmi darling ka man nahi bhara......iss liye naraj hain hamase....koi bat nahi meri jan...chalo aaj tumhari pyas buza dete hain"......ye romi tha, usaka hath sidhe rashmi ke skirt ke undar ghus chuka tha

"nahi...pl aisa mat karo...muze baksh do.....main bilkul chup rahungi....pl muze jane do".......rashmi ne akhari bar koshish ki, usaki ankhe lagatar baras rahi thi.

"nakhare mat dikha kutiya.....chuchap jaisa ye chahate hain, waisa kar...warna..!".........rinku puri tarah se rashmi par havi ho rahi thi.

"are nahi nahi,....aisa julum mat karo , hamari rashmi to bade pyar se chudegi...ye koi pahali bar thodehi chud rahi hain....?".....monty ka hath ab rashmi ki chuchiyo ki golai nap raha tha.

"mere dosto ko taklif ho rahi hain tere ess madmast jawani se khelane me....sali randi....top utar de apana...' rinku to jaise aaj rashmi ko puri tarah se todana chahati thi.....use etana humiliate karana chahati thi, ki age kabhi bhi wo usake khilaf kuchh bhi kaha, sunane se dare

"marati kya na karati' rashmi ne top utar diya, pink bra me kase yauvan bhar, chhipaye nahi chhip rahe the.......dono besabro ne bra utarane ki bhi rah nahi dekhi...dono bhid gaye nippales chusane me, ...bra ke upar se hi..rashmi kasmasane lagi, aaj use maja nahi aa raha tha, balki taklif ho rahi thi.....ab dono ne hi apanni pants ki zip khol li....rashmi ke dono hatho ko pant ke under ghusa diya.....

"ruko ab meri direction me hoga ye chudai ka program.....sabse pahale esse nangi karo...aur tum dono bhi, apane apane kapade utar do..!
agale hi pal dono hi rashmi par tut pade....romi ne zatake se uaski skrit aur panty uatr diye, aur monty ne bra noch dali...ek majboor ladaki ko nanga karane me waquat hi kitana lagana tha.....rashmi ek hath se, chhupaye na chhupane wali chuchiya chhupane ki koshish kar rahi thi, to dusare hath se, apani narm,najuk,mulayam balo se dhaki chut chhupane ki chesta kar rahi thi......monty, aur romi bhi nagna ho gaye.

"rashmi tum kutiya ho...hai na ...chalo kutiya ban ke dikhao...."....derector rinku ne adesh dandanaya.
apane ansu pochhati, kismat par roti rashmi ne adesh ka palan kiya, iss position me usake, chikane, gudaj bhari, masal kulhe upar uth gaye, hawa me.....chut ki dono pankhudiya fail gayi....gand ka chhed khulband ho raha tha........tani hui chuchiya latak rahi thi....monty aur romi ke lund apane aap tan gaye the, apani puri lambai aur motai me....mahaul me badhati uttejana ab rinku par bhi asar kar rahi thi..... usane bhi apane kapade utarane shuru kiye.....agale hi pal us kamare me sabhi nange the.

"romi isske hoth dekho kitane pyare hain,bilkul gulab ki tarah...kya tum dekhana nahi chahate aise hotho me tumhara lund kaisa dikhata hain......aur monty tum, jara es khubsurat chut ko dekho, kya tum esse sungh kar, chat kar nahi dekhana chahate ho......akhir hamari pyari saheli hain, essaki khubsurati ka maja hum nahi lootenge, to kaun lootega"........kahate kahate rinku ke hath khud apani chut ko kuradane lage.

rinku ka kahana tha ki dono ne apani apani position samhal li, romi ka lund rashmi ke hotho ke bich fasa tha, to monty ki jibh chut ki gaharai nap rahi thi...rinku rashmi ke charo pairo(?) me let kar, usaki chuchiyo ko masal rahi thi, khich rahi thi...........kafi der tak rashmi ki chut chatane ke bad,monty se raha nahi gaya, aur usane, apana khada tight lund usaki chut me ek hi zatake me ghusa diya.....romi ka lund muh me hone se rashmi chikh bhi na saki........ab usaki dono taraf se chudai ho rahi thi

romi to pahale se hi etana garm ho chuka ki rashmi ke muh me 15 minat se jada nahi tik paya, wahi zad gaya. lekin usane tab tak lund bahar nahi nikala jab tak pura mal rashmi ke pet na ja pahuche

romi ke zadane ke bad rinku ka agala adesh...........

monty tum apana lund nikal lo aur sofe par ja baitho...ghabarao nahi main tumhare sath KLPD nahi karungi........ab monty sofe par ja baitha......."rashmi tum ab monty ke lund par baitho.....apane hath se monty ka lund lelo apani chut me.......aur uchhal kud shuru karo"......director ka adesh tha, manana to tha hi......apman se jalati rashmi ne,apani bhavano par kabu karake waisa hi kiya...monty ka dil bagbag ho utha.....usane rashmi ki chuchiya kas ke pakad li, aur puri takat se masal ne laga, nippals umethane laga.....rashmi ke mulayam jism ka gharshan usame aur josh bhar raha tha........ab rashmi ko aur jalil karane ki niyat se rinku apani clean shaved, bahut jada chode jane se faili hue chut lekar, rashmi ke samane khadi ho gayi......rashmi ke balo ko pakad kar, usaka muh apani chut se satati, bol padi..."chal chat esse...achhe se saf kar'...jaise hi rashmi ki jibh ka sparsh rinku ki chut pe hua.....usake muh se kamuk siskariya nikal ne lagi

ab zadane ki bari monty ki thi....jaise hi rashami ne mahasus kiya, ki monty zadane wala hain, wo phir se gidgidane lagi....."pl monty andar mat girana, main pregnant ho jaungi.....rinku pl samzao esse...main tumhari har bat man rahi hu...tum meri etani bat mano pl......warna muze khudkushi ke alava koi rasta nahi bachega...pl"

rashmi ke muh se khudkushi shabd nikalna tha ki rimku ne monty ko eshara kiya,....monty ne badi hi anichha se rashmi ko lund par se uthaya,....gusse se usake muh ko chodane laga......rashmi ke pet me virya ki dusari kisht pahuch gayi

agale do ghante tak monty aur romi position badal badal ke use chodate rahe, rashmi ke sharir pe ek bhi aisa chhed baki nahi raha jaha lund ja sakata ho lekin dala na gaya ho.....wo chikhati rahi karahati rahi, raham ki bhik mangati rahi..lekin na kisi ko raham ana tha na aya
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yaar...rohit's story is understandable..but this story is going on wrong note.....every body is ready to read erotica but what i think people still have some imotions and they do not generally except the exploatation which is there in the story for Rashmi seems to hurt readers.

But this is my views..I generally do not read the stories in humilation and rapes..

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good efforts lekin yaar story me essa masala dalo ki yaar padne jyada mja aaye.

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Rashmi ke sath esha atya char nahi chalega.
Us ko bhi moka do rinku or us ke dosto ki bend baja ne ka
or un sab ky aeshi maro ke hath rakhne par bhi dard ho.
Magar bechari rashmi ko jane do.
Or usy ke hatho maro unky

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