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#11
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Very good storiy aage kya hua ya phir itni hi thi khani agar aage ho to zaror btana
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#12
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Jaldi agla part likh na.
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#14
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Aare yaaaaar agala part jaldi se likh na aab raha nahi jata.
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#15
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Aare jaldi jaldi update karo na yaaaaaaaaaar
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#16
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yaar ye story already kai sites pe available hai phir bhi adhuri story hi copy kyo ki ...
is story ki koi bhi ek line agar google per search ki jaaye to yeh poori story mil jayegi. |
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#19
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where r updates.....
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#20
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nice
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